Crazy eights

Crazy eights

A Poem by A. Fischer
"

Dont let me be lonely tonight!

"

The fear.......stimulates

while the mind.....contemplates

Scripted words....resonate

as this fire.....illuminates

© 2011 A. Fischer


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Enjoyed this. The beginnings could all be subsituted with the ends and still make sense any way you mix them...

Pretty brill!
Antonio :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Let's not stretch for the Poet's Dictionary.

This is again an excellent poem in that it conveys heavy messages with a light and concise touch. The choice of words is masterly.
Well done.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Brilliance compensates
when few words congregate

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this whole poem! Great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hmm the fire of illumination - enlightenment from scripted words - teh theme all links back for me - knowledge - the fear of the unknown - stimulates the need to find out - the contemplation - through words until alas, the fire burns!!! very nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Fears is our greatest motivator
our mind is our greatest tool
words are a starting point
the heart should be our greatest inspiration.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on January 16, 2011
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