Broken Mind

Broken Mind

A Poem by Lucius Vaul

Broken silence shatters still as
Roaring screams of mind erupt now
Offered up against my will while
Kept in chains of feeling ill with
Every whisper harsh and shrill seem
Never free of  thoughts corrupt

Moments brief, bleed into years
Inside this lost and misty place where
Nothing seems to quell the tears as
Dying  breath shows hope erased

© 2011 Lucius Vaul


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Very awesome. Your flow never stops. It's so fluid. Along with the dark sludgey morbidity it's so powerful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Lucius Vaul
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Lets see , what can I tell you about myself that my writing can not tell you on its own......My writing pretty much is who I am, put right out there for the entire world to see. I am a 45 year old ma.. more..

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