MONSTER (Please)

Just a general explanation of what runs through my mind a lot..

Please don’t hurt me.

It’s all I ask of you.

If you did,

I wouldn't know what to do.

 

Please spare me the pain.

I don’t want an aching heart.

If you damage me,

I’ll have to go back to the start.

 

Please don’t make me sad and angry,

When I have only just got back into high spirits.

I have had to put my heart back together in the past,

And it’s hard to piece together the tiny bits.

 

Please don’t become a monster,

And tear my world to shreds.

I don’t want you to be the mistake

That everyone makes and then dreads.

 

Please don’t make me believe,

What we have is real,

And say you love me,

If it isn’t actually what you feel.

Author's Note

your thoughts are appreciated :)

Reviews

[RosaliaSky]

i love this poem. Everyone, sometime is (or has) going to experence this, it's a part of life. you have put this fear into words, a hard thing to do. plus I love the little rhyme in each stanza, it dosen't apper too forced and it adds to the flow as you reed it. Great job.

[TheSweet]

This starts as a pleading from a submissive and weak person. But the end seems, to me, to have much more strength - as if they're possible able to control the situation with her plea. Thanks for sharing!

[Amila Jay]

An excellent poem :))

[SlightlyOdd]

You should add a dont in between the and and the say in the second to last line other thn that its good

[Dearantlers]

Amazing! I absolutely loved it! I completely agree with what Destinyxi said. Most people do have similar fears. Keep writing!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This poem had a nice flow. It was nicely written and really enjoyed reading it. And yes, I can relate because when I was younger I used to think this would come out and attack me. Thanks for sharing.

[Destinyxi]

Aww this poem is really nice. I think most people have similar fears :)

[AK]

Brilliant poem! The poem has a beautiful sound to it. The word syntax is brilliant! Keep writing!

[Tamia123]

I think we all feel like this sometimes and thats what makes this piece beautiful and amazing :) Great job!!!