I Care

I Care

A Poem by Luciole
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For a special someone in my life who has dealt with and still deals with several struggles in their life. They are always in my heart.

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Not everyone would understand.

But that isn’t something that would bother me,

Because all that matters is how I feel,

And that is what I want you to see.

        

I know things are difficult;

That there are things you must prepare for.

I just want to help.

If I could, I’d just show up at your door.

 

Sadly I cannot,

But that is not discouraging.

Because I know one day we’ll be together,

And we can both stop our waiting.

 

Before that happens, you need to make me a promise.

A promise that states you will never give in,

To the challenges the world throws your way.

And that you will release the strength I know you have within.

 

Never let go,

Don’t you dare!

If you ever feel like you’re slipping,

Just remember that I care.

© 2012 Luciole


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Luciole
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This made me smile :-)


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant! I know how you feel! I care I care!! Great job:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is great!! excellent write :))

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Brilliant poem! I know how it feels like...and I think you did a great job expressing it! I hope whoever you write this poem for finds some peace..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Luciole
Luciole

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Luciole is a pen name. In French it means "firefly" I'm a 18 year-old girl who loves to write, read, and listen to music. I'm a little bit of a nerd. I like to sing a lot more than I'd care to ad.. more..

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