I Wish

A "love" poem of questions and wondering.

Sometimes I wonder how it would be,
If he were here with me . . .

Would he care if I was sad,

Comfort me when I'm low,

Or hug me while I cry?

None of this I know.

Would he love hanging out?

Would he smile when I kissed him too?

Would he be happy to call me his?

Would any of that be true?

Maybe he'd get sick of me,

And my odd ball ways.

Or he'd just find someone better,

After only a few days.

How do I know I'm different than any other girl?

How do I know he isn't just,

A hormonal teenage boy,

Who only holds within him, a powerful lust?

Sometimes I wish he,

Were right here with me.

It would be much easier to see,

What this can maybe turn out to be.

Author's Note

Reviews welcome :)

Reviews

[☯]

It's easy to feel worthless and unloved from someone you feel so affection for. There are good guys and bad guys in the world and hopefully one day we'll all be ready to handle all these stresses! I really liked the last line because we truly don't know where we're headed and that's the excitement of it all. A great poem I really liked reading it. :)

[Archia]

I liked the different parts of the story that came across in each stanza. The uncertainty in the last stanza was really nicely expressed. I really liked that last line, it summed up the rest of the poem and whilst still put an end to it, left it open.

[Sugar and Spice]

I liked the uncertainties you displayed in this poem, and the colour change was perfect! Well done :) also *none is spelt incorrectly but thats just a minor fault, all in all great work!

[SheActsLikeSummer]

I really liked this. You've described in words - beautifully - how every teenage girl feels like when they see their crush. Great job. :P

[SuicidePact.]

This was really good!

loved the change in color!

The first lines really captured my attention, they made me want to continue reading, i loved how they flowed, this whole poem flowed really well actually!

[Rae Emeral]

This is great! I love the questions you ask, I have asked these myself at times. This has a great flow and is pleasant to read. I love it! amazing piece!
~Rae Emeral

[Angelic Surrender]

Beautiful work :)