I Wish

A "love" poem of questions and wondering.

Sometimes I wonder how it would be,
If he were here with me . . .

Would he care if I was sad,

Comfort me when I'm low,

Or hug me while I cry?

None of this I know.

Would he love hanging out?

Would he smile when I kissed him too?

Would he be happy to call me his?

Would any of that be true?

Maybe he'd get sick of me,

And my odd ball ways.

Or he'd just find someone better,

After only a few days.

How do I know I'm different than any other girl?

How do I know he isn't just,

A hormonal teenage boy,

Who only holds within him, a powerful lust?

Sometimes I wish he,

Were right here with me.

It would be much easier to see,

What this can maybe turn out to be.

Author's Note

Reviews welcome :)

Reviews

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It's easy to feel worthless and unloved from someone you feel so affection for. There are good guys and bad guys in the world and hopefully one day we'll all be ready to handle all these stresses! I really liked the last line because we truly don't know where we're headed and that's the excitement of it all. A great poem I really liked reading it. :)

[MoriartyMesa]

To mirror this is possible on the music leave. I think it might be this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J6K_mueZMgE
Nice job, loss for words, just links lol, sorry

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully written.

[Teenage Romeo]

Hm

[Malaya Roses]

You gonna the the shine with powerful thought. This a poem of self-questioner and admission you not knowing something shows you are ready to make a good choice. It is true, sometimes temptation is there; but you are worthy than him. Let yourself rise and keep the wish for the best come true.
Beautiful poem from a young hope and you are the young teenage with mature mind. Excellent ink.

[Corkee1808]

I just love your poetry so much! I have posted it on facebook told people about it and read it to people! I LOVE IT! YOU ARE VERY TALENTED!!!

[Corey Coreys]

Your poems are the most passionate writings I've ever read. Amazing job yet again my friend! Keep it up :D

[Amila Jay]

Just wish he would be here ... Nice write dear :))

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

a very true wish,wonderfully expressed.liked it..nice write.

[Who Cares]

I again like the color coated when the I wish is high lighted in purple. quite beautiful.