Adieu

About a person who.. well, the poem explains itself

I didn't know what to do,

About the way I felt about you.

I wasn't sure if maybe,

You were blind and couldn’t see,

Or perhaps you had no doubt,

And decided to make me rough it out.

Honestly, it doesn’t matter at all,

Because you put me through hell and made me feel so small.

Like I didn't even have control over my own destiny,

And there wasn’t any happiness left for me.

And as much as I’d love to do the same to you,

I’ve decided to be the bigger person,

And bid you adieu.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

an excellent piece for one so young...do not stop writing you may have a great future

[SlightlyOdd]

This is good i like the reflection and they say if you love someone let them go

[Corey Coreys]

Sometimes saying goodbye is a second change. Yes, i know that's a song (thank you Shinedown) I love this piece. Its so raw and you capture the confusion of love and of the loss of love. Great job :D

[Michael X]

sometimes goodbyes are for the best, this poem leaves the reder with a
powerful impression of loss and renewel, suffering then overcoming
circumstances that makes a person greater for having experience it.
passionately rendered, you have talent, keep it up :)

[Sahar moonlight]

You're right, bin adieu.
Thats better than getting hurt and living in pain.

Wise poem and nice rythme

[Aravind]

Your emotions flow into your writing very well. Simplicity at its best!

The last line (and the echo from the title) is a really nice way to end your poem. I enjoyed reading every letter of it. Job well done!

[Taylor Jade]

I think this poem is great. There's just something I really love about it, especially how the last line wraps everything up.

[Pikachu]

I like this. c:

It's so real, and I've been through that. Great write.

[Teenage Romeo]

hoo rah..

[Luciole]

someone hurt me, and i wanted to get them back but i knew it wasnt worth it, so i let it go