To Get Away

To Get Away

A Poem by Luciole
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The colors represent the mood. In the first stanza, the world is foggy. Then in the second one, sight starts to appear. And the last stanza represents, everything being clear.

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Here we go.
Just come with me.
No one has to know.

Come and see,
The sky, the moon,
And all those stars.

You'll never fall.
You'll have me.
It's great to get away from it all,
Just wait and see.

© 2011 Luciole


Author's Note

Luciole
The stars, moon, and sky represent seeing not only what's in front of you, but what's around you, and what it consists of.

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I really liked this, I also liked how you made it foggy then you start to see and then its clear, very clever. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Luciole
Luciole

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Luciole is a pen name. In French it means "firefly" I'm a 18 year-old girl who loves to write, read, and listen to music. I'm a little bit of a nerd. I like to sing a lot more than I'd care to ad.. more..

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