Misunderstood

Unknown caller,

Unknown artist,

Unknown author.

Being unknown is sometimes the hardest.

Different movies, 

Different books,

Different music.

Is it ever more than it looks?

To see someone,

And wonder why,

They saw you,

But walked right by.

They looked different, 

And to you, were unknown,

Not over-exposed,

Or even shown.

Why is this so?

Because they never could,

Express their thoughts or feelings,

Without being misunderstood.

Author's Note

I want to know, what did you think? Please only constructive comments. Thanks!

Reviews

[Brenden Taylor]

I like it due to it's short-sweet-and-to-the-point-ness. You do a very good job with the rhyme scheme. It's very concise, but even with as concise as it is, I feel like the rhythm is off-set just a little in a couple stanzas. Overall a wonderful write.

Peace,
Brenden

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Ok, so the first two stanzas are one of the highest example i've read so far of a good use of anaphoras, not kidding, it was amazing to read it !!
The next three stanzas are special for me because i can identify myself in them :)
Great job !

[Tasha]

I did feel something, its hard when people misunderstand you for the things you like or your believes. I really enjoyed it, great write!
♥ Ta'Shandra