Apologies

rambling...

I have fallen down... and I can't seem to gasp a breath or utter a sound. I have stumbled upon a truth. Odd how that can break your legs.... Forgive me if I ask for help... If I should trip inside my mind... As I lie upon the floor, would you still be there for me, if all I have to give is myself? Forgive me if I ask for help... I cling to the heart and soul with which you have quenched my thirst and hunger... Satisfied my every craving. The only home I have ever known, burrowed within your chest. Always reaching, I clutch the hand with which you have calmed so many storms and conjured so many dreams. Even if it is only inside my mind... You are the staircase up, out of this world. Forgive me if  I ask for help... If I should trip inside my mind... 

Reviews

[Justin Xavier Smith]

This one really spoke to me. In a whole lot of ways. And I really like the imagery and the wordplay here, the way you play with common terminology and turn it on its head.

And as the writer of a novel called "Deviant" I am most interested in this thing you call the "Deviant Coalition" in your "about" section