Desperate For Impact

Many say my very best piece although most feel sick to their stomach after listening.

Richard has lost his whole world. Now he is detreemed to have an impact,

but at what price

 

Reviews

[K. N. Wise]

I listened to this and the moral proved a good point, however the writing itself I believe needed a bit of work. There were some repetitions and other things couldve have been edited out. The emotion and motivation of the character couldve been more defined but over all this piece is very creative and showed a great amount of insight and wisdom.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Very well told story with alot of wisdom.. a man with a really briliiant idea unto himself selfishly wanting to leave his mark.. sets upon a plan to ACTUALLY make a difference and make the biggest impact in history (or so he thinks).. his brother I think was smarter than him.. educating him that his great plan would never be known as history will no longer exist with such an impact.. too late he realizes his brother is right.. which I thought was strange as someone so intelligent could not preconceive such a basic thing.. great job!

[Enigmatic Amor]

Nice piece. Interesting argument. You have a great voice and well paced delivery. I enjoyed the full experience.

Voice, graphics and story. Great Concept for a multi-media world.