The NEW IN THE BLOOD TRAILER

ITB's New Trailer. what do you think

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Reviews

[STurner]

Nice Trailer. I would love to hear more... and of course that is what a trailer is for. So this seems like a wonderful beginning to...? The only issue is that the last frames have something written in red on a black background which made it really tough for me to read. White and red works well for some. Black and white for the final message would be great as you have only allowed a few seconds to read it. Sorry, I missed it. But there are some of us who wear glasses and this can be a hassle when a fast read on line is necessary. Other than that, the trailer is catchy. I like it and look forward to hearing and seeing more.

[Sseoni]

What an interesting trailer! It was very fascinating and intriguing to the reader! I really liked it! :D

[SLAlexander]

That was good. O would have liked it if the backgrounds were more advanced. All in all, I think it's great.

[George Love]

I like this one much better. It is very informative without giving away too much information. The video flowed much smoother and the voice over seemed very much more relaxed. Now, if you followed this very closely, you might guess my next statement......Lose some of the adverbs in the text. very dark, very strange, horrible ordeal and it will flow better. They had a strange day, at teh end of the ordeal, etc. Don't dump them all, but use them selectively to emphasize your powerful points.

[Georgia Gypsy]

The trailor gives just enough to make me want to hear more! I think the visuals are good without being overdone. I love the feel it gives the story, young, fun and adventurous!

[Through the Gateway]

It wasn't bad. I thought it could use a bit more work, thuogh. I know what you can do and I think you can make the trailer much more dramatic. Still, though, it does serve the purpose of getting readers interested.

[Joel Alvarado]

In my honest personal opinion, this seems somewhat kiddish. I wasn't thinking blood curdling drama as much as I was thinking not another twilight book. The art wasn't particularly fascinating either. Something that through me off was the voice over of you speaking and having to read something that was different from what you were saying during the trailer. You did this a few times and I began to loose interest. I prefer to read the inside cover or reviews of the book as opposed to watching a trailer for it. If you have one I would love to read it, but if I hadn't previously known about your book this trailer certainly wouldn't have won me over. Please don't take it personally, I'm just writing from the prospective of someone who hasn't seen the trailer before.

[Risa McCarthy]

that sounds pretty cool. good luck with IN THE BLOOD^_^

[Fabian G. Franklin]

It's very video game feeling. I wonder if this type of media will actually inspire people to buy the book though. I generally buy books on several factors. 1. The author- Arte they popular and do they generally write material that I like to read. 2. Cover art of the book itself. If I see a book in the store that has cool cover art, it makes me want to pick it up and browse a bit of inside cover. 3. Content. Is it subject matter that I like to read about. 4. Price. Is it something I can afford? And I have added a great many books to my personal library off the discount shelf. Everybody loves a bargain. I'm actually more inclined to buy books at the library which have been discarded or left for sale by private individuals than I am to buy them at the store. I bought Nelson Demille's "The Gold Coast" for a dollar for example. If I were a video gamer, which I am not, this format would probably appeal to me greatly. I like the layout you present, I'm just not sure if it will connect with the "reading" audience. I suppose only time will tell. But good luck with this cutting edge endeavor.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

that was freakin awsome.