War...

A rambling I did long about war, and what war really means.

Author's Note

Review please

Reviews

[Mr. Revan]

for ages, since the dawn of mankind, war has been fought for what you describe. Those that want peace, by working together, as an entire species, rather than self destruction. Good vs Evil, they always say. and as much as i would love to agree with you, that we need to be on one side, the side of peace, something is changing in the face of carnage, war, and violence. And, in my opinion, I would prefer to be on the side of survival, rather than working to bring peace. this is only because of the anti, or negative of your part of working together. Humanity could work together, but what if the enemy we're facing, whatever it may be(something out of fiction, something real, or just total chaos), the 'enemy' will be channeling its energy together as well.

but your "rambling", was wonderful, and an insight on war, showing me yet another perspective of things

[lawrence bear]

a good piece you constructed, I like it

[Liza]

I enjoyed listening to your soothing yet authoratitive voice. I agree. As jimmy hendrix says, when the the power of love overcomes the love of power, we will know peace.

[McKenna]

I love this! I esp. enjoyed the part where it said "We will know longer allow our hands to be bloodied by oil, water, wealth" love it! How true :))

[ShadowHaze]

Awesome. This was interesting way of putting your writing up on here. But I agree with you on all these things, because there is only one war. Excellent job! :)

[Su' Nacnetaf]

Interesting way to present your poem/rambling, I agree with almost everything you said, I liked the way you pointed out the fact that there's only one side, which belongs to humans. Great talk, excellent work.

[Word Mutiny]

i love how you point out the fact that a war is being fought by those who want peace.. very clever! i couldn't agree more with what you said, it was short but to the point and i, for one, would like to know how to make such an impact in so little words (in comparison to people that write ESSAYS about things like this)! i applaud you! :))

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I am joining the side of peace aswell..I have known for a long time that there was only one war..I liked this very much. again I compliment your reading ..it's great to be able to hear the poem.

[bluessadmood]

God my friend ,you are becoming like my hero,a peacemaker ,you are a winner now and every time
yes there is one war left that we have to fight,and its going be a very long and tough one
Cause we will not allow a single soul to die for a stupid war,for oil or any other stupidity
We shall overcome one day my friend..cause we are all brothers and sisters..
we shall overcome and spread love and peace one day and abolish hatred from the minds of
stupid war mongers,cause we are all the same blood,where ever we are,its our good actions to this world
and its people,that will makes us the better ones..
you are saying the most beautiful things..ha ha I want to add you as a friend again ha ha
lovely one more ramblings..