Don't ask me To review.....

lots of people ask me to review. Read this, if you still want me to review let me know I will be happy to.

you don't want that.

You ask me,
I would like you to review these words.
But when I do,
you are stung by my honesty.
You say I am mean,
But I just want you to get better.
You say I am unfair,
but in the end what I say is the truth.

Because in the end I don't give a crap about your feelings,
In the End I only care about your work.

So don't ask me to review.
you can ask me to read and not offer my ideas.
you can ask me not to look at all.
but, don't ask me to review.

because, I take writing very seriously,
and if I see something wrong with a piece I will not stand by,
I will not say you are a great talent unless you are.
I will not lie, or help your ego
I am here to improve my work,
and to help others improve theirs.

I don't know what you are here for,
but don't ask me to review....
Your sweet little heart can't take what I have to dish.




 

Reviews

[Marlena]

I think you're right when you say that people shouldn't ask for a review on something they wrote if they aren't prepared for blunt honesty. However, I disagree with the fact that blunt honesty has to be something to hurt their ego. If I'm going to review something and say it had it's faults, I wouldn't say it in a way that hurts the person's ego, because they weren't acting conceited at all, they were just looking for help, you know?

Though I think everyone appreciates a good, honest and clear review, I don't think a person should be nasty about it. I also think (actually I know this as a fact) if a person has low self esteem, then they're going to jump in and defend their work if they think that you're telling them they all out suck in the writing field, which is probably a response you've gotten to some reviews. Really, if you're going to be honest then don't be nasty, is all I'm trying to say. ^_^

[brinkley]

I agree with you--I've been blocked a couple of times--for constructive criticism. Why are you here if you don't want to get better? It's like some people just want ot hear how good they are now instead of how good they could be.

[L.V. Ana]

I might be one of the few who likes honest reviews...

[Sheila Kline]

You are honest, and after reading most of the other reviews of this particular piece, I note that there are more writers who admit they value an honest critique, than those who would be offended by such words.

I am not an advanced writer by any means, but I write from my heart. And, as a writer who wants to convey messages, tell stories, entertain, I value comments that are made to help me better my efforts. I realize that I have much room for growth, and when someone makes a suggestion, or notes an error, I do attempt to correct it, or remember their advice. After all, I cannot improve without observations and notes made by other reviewers.

May the day never come when I am not open to evaluating such comments that are made to help me be a better writer! I may not always agree, but I shall accept them with grace, and strive to become better at that which I consider my artform. I also take writing seriously.

Your honesty is noted and appreciated!

[Christine Hannah Redfor..]

I appreciate honest reviews. I take the craft seriously. I realize I am new and still learning. There are some people that just want to hear how great they are, clever, brilliant, etc. They will write a one-line review on someone's work, hoping to entice the author to reciprocate. Gosh darn forbid it if you call them a Mary Sue and suggest they go to Sparkly Poo House. If my plot doesn't make sense, tell me. Don't nitpick on the grammar. I'm more concerned if the storyline is credible rather than whether or not using passive voice is appropriate. Thank you for your poem.

[Ken Simm.]

Not exactly great writing but refreshingly honest for all that and that is what I like about it. Honest and different. What we all need.

[RYGON MASK]

hehe >.

[R J Askew]

If only a few more were like you. We all need supportive comment. But the move vital comment is truthful comment. Truthful comment does not always make the commentator popular however and is often not well received. Ach, tough stuff the truth! But, the very best stuff. Respect.

[Emily B]

wow, dear, you've certainly pulled a lot of reviews with this one. You've been around a long time. And I guess I have, too, some things never change. There are attention hounds and drama queens and good, honest writers in the cafe. It's up to each of us to sort them out in their proper places.

Every morning I log on to some well-meaning reviewers trashing somebody's work. You know, sometimes, I follow the mean and nasty reviewer home and read their words. Seldom do I find they have anything to crow about.

But, certainly, if you find yourself on my page. Give me something I can work with. Nothing is ever really complete.

[Flo_writer]

This is a controversial free write to say the least. Please do take the time to review some of my work. Honesty is always welcome. I believe all that can be said about this poetry has already been said. And sadly the anger of some reviewers may have led them to rate this piece below what it deserves. But it matters not, we're our own best and worst critics.