FREE PREVIEW #1 :The Long Way.

FREE PREVIEW #1 :The Long Way.

A Chapter by V. Lucien Maier
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Taylor and Scott are having a normal day of climbing, when events pull them into a whole new world. Check out the first chapter of The In The Blood Series for Free! Please Review

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© 2009 V. Lucien Maier


Author's Note

V. Lucien Maier
Please let me know what you think.
If you are interested in the full series. (THere is oh so much more) check out
Www.Inthebloodonline.Com

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Personally I have trouble with audio novels. And if you're looking for a review of any productive sort, I would recommend posting at least a chapter on this site in print format. That way it's much easier to read and understand.

Nonetheless, I did happen to watch a bit of the audio and enjoyed it. I liked how you illustrated and animated it so that if flowed with your words. Sometimes it was a bit hard to understand what you or the recorder was trying to say, it was very monotone sounding - I would have someone with an acting background who can enunciate clearly, to do a recording for it instead. With Audio's you really need someone who can get into character and make them seem real.

I'm hoping you will post a print version of this so I can get a better grasp on your story. It sounds interesting though from what I've seen and heard so far : ]

Lady

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoyed this tale. I'm not biased when it comes to stories. I enjoy listening to mp3 stories while driving, etc. So for me, this was a pleasant audio to listen to. The description and setting can be seen clearly in the mind's eye while listening. Very good job! I wish you the best of success in your work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i listened intently, and did enjoy it, though it is not my kind of read. the detail gets you into the story, and by my predictions something comes up later about the girl that he had loved.

again, quite good. i may take a look at your full book, but i dont use credit cards or pay pal =[

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The story very much captured my interest. I agree with Lady; audio novels and I don't really mix, but I couldn't help but listen to your chapter. I'm glad that I did listen though, because it's good. Is the book published yet, or no? If not, when will it be? I can't help but love a good story, and yours is defiantly that.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Personally I have trouble with audio novels. And if you're looking for a review of any productive sort, I would recommend posting at least a chapter on this site in print format. That way it's much easier to read and understand.

Nonetheless, I did happen to watch a bit of the audio and enjoyed it. I liked how you illustrated and animated it so that if flowed with your words. Sometimes it was a bit hard to understand what you or the recorder was trying to say, it was very monotone sounding - I would have someone with an acting background who can enunciate clearly, to do a recording for it instead. With Audio's you really need someone who can get into character and make them seem real.

I'm hoping you will post a print version of this so I can get a better grasp on your story. It sounds interesting though from what I've seen and heard so far : ]

Lady

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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