FREE PREVIEW #2 ::Enn Nacht

A short from my vampire series In The Blood. This happens before In The Blood 1 takes place. Listen for Free, and please review.

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lizanne]

Very interesting and holds the attention. Your graphic pics give the eye something on which to focus and helps to hold the interest. Maybe just a little more inflection into the voice. But all in all this is a good work and you can see the author has put a lot of effort forth. Good job and should attract an audience of those that like to listen to the stories, instead of reading. The storyline is a good one.

[Mioki]

This preview was really action packed, and kept the reader on their toes. The way you narrate is terrific and has that right quality that your type of story needs. It's interesting and informative, and yet there's still much questions to be answered. I also like the visuals you had with this. Added with the music and the tone of it, the audio was great. Your story shows your writing skills, I'm very glad to have listened in. Thank you for sharing this, I always love to read and listen to your work.

[Sseoni]

Cool story! I really liked it! It's amazing how you can record this! I loved th whole story! I could imagine everything happening in my head, it was sorta like a movie playing in my mind. Really awesome story! :D

[Lunar Pup]

It was good I loved how I could see everything easily and how it was really good. I cant write stories so this is really good compared to anything that I could ever do.

[Freder Fredersen (aka G..]

Well written. Well told.

Vampires on motorcycles is a cool thing to envision.

Cheers!
G

[Closed Account]

I agree with Lauren Marie. i never really liked vampire stories, but this was pretty good. I could imagine it all while i was listening. Great job! =)
~Bella Rose

[deeps]

I loved this one. I thought it was wonderful.
I just like reading them better. I thought it was amazing.

[Lauren Marie]

I'm not a big fan of vampire stories, but I could picture the entire story in my mind as it was voiced.
The only thing that irked me was that as the main character soared through the air, he watched his enemies fall into the canal. The scene in my mind was that he was suspended in mid-air, frozen, as he looked behind him. Maybe instead you could have him reach the other side of the canal and watch everyone from that vantage point.
But this was a great story!
~Lauren