Bite Me....

A poem about my frustations with Vampires in others books. and basicly why I wrote my vampire series.

Bite Me...

The vampires stream about.
Edward with his sultry looks and his noble endeavors of love.  Fighting off the affections of a weak human girl.
Lestat only looks for out for number one, and stomping on history for his own gain.
Bill Compton, Drinking his blood from a bottle.
Dracula a story book monster, consuming innocents.

But no matter how many words I have read the questions always remain.
Where did you come from?
Why are you here?
and most importantly why are you alright with standing on the sidelines.
hiding in the shadows.
Letting the weak humans rule the world?

Vampires always seem content to sit back , feed and let history pass them by?
WHY.

My vampires remember who they were.
My vampires have ambition to make a mark.
My vampires are not happy with the shadows.
My vampires are going to war.....

Come by and meet Taylor, a power like you have never seen.
Meet Thierant, an old vampire with an odd habit of living a bit to load.
Meet the first vampires, and know their history.
Meet the vampires in LA, Which take on such a noble goal without knowing the consequences of their actions.

So if you like vampires, then come on by.
but I warn you, Taylor does not sing like a rock star.
Ray'nar has no end to his ambition.
Trisha, Ashley, and Amy, would never let some vampire protect them.

Come on by, but dont bring garlic, or a cross they wont help you.

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Author's Note

of course I love vampires, and that is why I wrote a whole series on them. this is just to show the holes that always bothered me in other stories. if you are interested in IN THE BLOOD> check out.
www.inthebloodonline.com

Reviews

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

Hmm, well I like this poem and I don't. Vampires are weird for me, I'm indifferent about them. I like the original vampire like Dracula but the new twilight ones I'm not too big on. So I do like what you said about your vampires. It's a different take on vampires and I think people need that. I'm just more of a fan of poetry that's more about human nature, and I felt like this one was more advertising your IN THE BLOOD story.

But looking at the purpose of this poem and not my own views I have to say you did a very nice job and I liked this.

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I am going to check your story out sounds interesting

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

It sounds really cool but I cant find the story preview.

[Angelic Darkness]

I am a BIG fan on vampires, fact and fiction, and your story does sound
intriguing. I can tell, this is NOT your average vampire.

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[unspokenguilt]

sounds very interesting!