Bite Me....

A poem about my frustations with Vampires in others books. and basicly why I wrote my vampire series.

Bite Me...

The vampires stream about.
Edward with his sultry looks and his noble endeavors of love.  Fighting off the affections of a weak human girl.
Lestat only looks for out for number one, and stomping on history for his own gain.
Bill Compton, Drinking his blood from a bottle.
Dracula a story book monster, consuming innocents.

But no matter how many words I have read the questions always remain.
Where did you come from?
Why are you here?
and most importantly why are you alright with standing on the sidelines.
hiding in the shadows.
Letting the weak humans rule the world?

Vampires always seem content to sit back , feed and let history pass them by?
WHY.

My vampires remember who they were.
My vampires have ambition to make a mark.
My vampires are not happy with the shadows.
My vampires are going to war.....

Come by and meet Taylor, a power like you have never seen.
Meet Thierant, an old vampire with an odd habit of living a bit to load.
Meet the first vampires, and know their history.
Meet the vampires in LA, Which take on such a noble goal without knowing the consequences of their actions.

So if you like vampires, then come on by.
but I warn you, Taylor does not sing like a rock star.
Ray'nar has no end to his ambition.
Trisha, Ashley, and Amy, would never let some vampire protect them.

Come on by, but dont bring garlic, or a cross they wont help you.

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Author's Note

of course I love vampires, and that is why I wrote a whole series on them. this is just to show the holes that always bothered me in other stories. if you are interested in IN THE BLOOD> check out.
www.inthebloodonline.com

Reviews

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

Hmm, well I like this poem and I don't. Vampires are weird for me, I'm indifferent about them. I like the original vampire like Dracula but the new twilight ones I'm not too big on. So I do like what you said about your vampires. It's a different take on vampires and I think people need that. I'm just more of a fan of poetry that's more about human nature, and I felt like this one was more advertising your IN THE BLOOD story.

But looking at the purpose of this poem and not my own views I have to say you did a very nice job and I liked this.

[Anita B Jacques]

Sorry, not interested in vampires at all.

[Cassandra D.]

I loved it! I'm a huge vampire fan, but I like wolves, or werewolves better! I'll add it to my READING LIST!

[H]

I love this. I was never a huge vampire fan although I did enjoy some Anne Rice and Bram Stoker. The modern idea of a vampire is a little sickening to me.

[Sidewalk]

I am trying to understand the infatuation that so many have with vampires. The basic concept is a dead creature that must live off fluids of living beings. Perhaps it's a form of escapism, to be transformed from the dismal routine of everyday life and become something better than you are now, stronger, and more beautiful.
If anything, vampires are an excellent device to analyze the western world's obsession with renewal through destruction and sustainability through leaching. I haven't read many vampire books. But I recently read "Let the right one in" by John Ajvide Lindqvist. I found it gave an interesting twist to the vampire romance.

[Emily]

I think ill check out the story but i warn you I happen to love Edward and Lestat ;]

[Queen Jummarrium]

i love vampires! and i'm going to check out that story. =)

[Stacey Watts]

This is a very good piece. I would love to check out your work and read your vampire stories.

[Mary]

I'm with you on twilight but Anne Rice is one of the greatest writers of our time. Have you ever read a book called Memnoch the devil. If you haven't try it it might redeem her from some of Lestats bullshit,lol.

[deeps]

I like this, i even got a laugh out of as well
Vampires are cool.

[RYGON MASK]

*yawn*