Very good, indeed, I like how you speak about society as human race, I do that myself also, but I don't really use it as much as I should. Everyone is equal and we should forget the sense of superiority, quite true, I believe deeply it is true. The speech format of your poems is interesting, rather than making someone read (something which sometimes is boring to some people), you'd rather make them listen (something which is far more comfortable and it has a greater impact). The listener can feel the words the exact way they are supposed to be felt. Excellent rambling.
i must comend you on your fine words of wandering to truths door. it manifest such good images from the destructive images yoiu used to creat the bases of the poem and it always sounds better when a writer reads his poem. well done!
Very good, indeed, I like how you speak about society as human race, I do that myself also, but I don't really use it as much as I should. Everyone is equal and we should forget the sense of superiority, quite true, I believe deeply it is true. The speech format of your poems is interesting, rather than making someone read (something which sometimes is boring to some people), you'd rather make them listen (something which is far more comfortable and it has a greater impact). The listener can feel the words the exact way they are supposed to be felt. Excellent rambling.
yet another piece very well done... very insightful and honest... you have a real talent for using the right words and flow to really get the reader thinking. Not all people can do that, and definatly not as inderect as you can. Without even trying. It seems as though the reader(listener) is drawn in, and just wants to hear more. awsome:)
Words to live by. Very brilliant piece. Do we ever really have equality? Excellent piece. I kind of like the audio thing. Nice break on the eyes. lol...
V. Lucien Maier was born in 1973, in Amersfoort, in the Netherlands.
His father a civil engineer had a love of travel, and both parents loved skiing. When the opportunity arose to move to .. more..