She Floats

She Floats is an Audio poem that is entirely Free. Can't wait to hear reviews!

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Reviews

[CircusNerd]

i feel like this is a literal larger than life view of something that goes on in everyday life. when someone feels under-appreciated or unloved, it's easy for them to fall on others who suddenly appear out of nowhere and supposedly give that lonely person the "support" they need. and if this person goes far enough, that someone might just be willing to throw everything else away without thinking about their sentimental value and importance. great job :-)

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

I'm not sure I really got the point of this poem.
If I got the point I think I was supposed to get than this was a very good conversation poem.
I loved how you did like the different voices in it.
It helped me understand who was saying what.
Very nice =D

[Ama May Cooper]

The music gives it a kinda spirtual sense, and your voice if that is yours is definatly something that works very well with this piece. I really liked it, an interesting way of presenting it

[lindsay]

Ah, I loved this one a lot. I too, was wondering who "she" was and like how you presented it. I agree with this poem on how humans to do not appreciate Earth. It is an eerie piece indeed and almost an awakening? Anyways I really enjoyed this!

[ShaneBerry]

i liked it, everyone thinks that if we die the earth dies too, the earth aint gonna go anywere!!!!!!! WE ARE! lol i liked it lol did u make it
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[Sseoni]

Very interesting poem! I was seriously wondering who 'she' was, and was actually surprised to find out who 'she' really was! What an excellent poem! Wonderful read! :D

[Marie Anzalone]

An interesting fact only a scientist like me would really care about- for every single "free-living" species on earth, it is estimated there are 3 species of parasites. In other words, ~75 of life on the planet is parasitic in nature. Kind of gives new meaning to biodiversity and PETA's "don't kill the animals ever" campaign, doesn't it?

I disagree in principle with the concept that humans are parasites, though. Kind of hard when you've actually studied the gruesome realm of the creatures firsthand, including the cocktail in my own gut that almost killed me in 2003.

That being said, I enjoyed your presentation, and the imagery was great. Thanks again for sharing! :-)

[An owl on the moon]

Such an interesting insight into earth and all she is... her feelings and thoughts of life... humorous and moving... Very intriguing to hear it read. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work!

[Through the Gateway]

Kind of dark, kind of chilling. Kinda...humorous. I liked it. An interesting outlook on our place in the cosmos.

[Poetic Injustice]

What an interesting piece! I enjoyed in immensely. Commentary in poetry on a "cosmic" scale.