I hope

I hope

A Poem by DarkInside
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Just read it. Hopeless crushes ftw. (written last year.)

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I hope that one day you find someone who loves you the way I do
I hope that when you see to them you become too nervous to speak
Your breath hitches in your throat and your hands become shaky 
I hope that when you see them smile it makes your heart flutter 
And brightens up your day
And when you see that they're sad you're able to make them happy

I hope that one day you will be content with them
Holding their hand
Going on dates with them
Just being with them

I hope that one day you'll gain the courage to make them yours
I hope that you will last for as long as possible

I admit I hope that it is me

© 2015 DarkInside


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Gee
Aww,how sweet.Very well expressed.Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


DarkInside

9 Years Ago

Thank you c:
Comes straight from the heart, you can feel the pain from the crush. I have a story Lovesick about that pain, can you let me know what you think of it ? Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


DarkInside

9 Years Ago

Thank you and of course.
I really liked this poem because it was just you saying what you think and feel. You opened up and I thought it was great.

Posted 9 Years Ago


DarkInside

9 Years Ago

Thank you c:
Yes, I remember those feelings quite well. Beautiful poem! It has a nice flow to it and glides off the tongue when read aloud. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


DarkInside

9 Years Ago

Awh, thank you. Glad you liked it c:
I know those feelings I feel them to. Crushes are bitter sweet.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkInside

9 Years Ago

Indeed they are.

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Added on September 25, 2015
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Merseyside , United Kingdom



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