My past in 8 lines...

Just read it TW; Mnetions of alcohol abuse and self harm.

Mummy loved daddy,

Daddy didn't love mummy,

Mummy turned to the blade,

Daddy loved mummy, then they were okay,

But daddy turned to drink,

Mummy lost her mind,

Daddy lost his morals,

I lost my innocence... 

Reviews

[SkylarQuotex]

This is pretty good, although most poems don't use punctuation besides question marks.
good start though. :)