Love is like an acid trip

This was written to my fiancé <3 he's been with me through so much and keeps me no my feet.

Love is like an acid trip
Never knowing when to tip
Tilt and spin but never fall
I am with you through it all
Laughs and smiles keep us whole
Always able to reach our goal
Do not cry do not shout
I will be with you through this drought
Never knowing what's to come
Purely looking for the fun
Time to play, time to love
We fly about like two doves
Always love, never fight
Only looking for the light
Love is like an acid trip
Never knowing when to tip.

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Very nice,
It entice,
I like the flow,
You sure know how to whoa,

Love to see more
You're not a bore
You can still explore
Show you're hardcore

[LalaLuciegirl]

You are adorable with your rhyming comments.

[NeiL ArandA]

Looking forward for your next post . You have it in you !

[Antoñyo]

I enjoyed this piece. It has a light power, a strength from trial and error, like going to hell and aking it back...while being able to love throughout the whole trip. Rare but beautiful!

Thanks for the share

[LalaLuciegirl]

Thank you so much. It's the first piece I've done in a long time.

[Anto&ntilde;yo]

Your fiancé seems to be something special and thank him for me, because I'll be returning for more!
You're very welcome