Heavens around us

Heavens around us

I'll cast a net into the universe
for my future love
and when a blind comet snares into its web,
I'll harvest its minerals
and paint it into our household walls.
So whenever we make love,
whether in the darkness of the dining room drapes
or the melancholy of a closed door,
the heavens will always be around us. 

Reviews

[Jeccka]

I like the idea. I imagine painting a comet onto the walls would have a dark and starry effect - the classic Milky Way look but with more shine and sparkle. Love the imagery portrayed.

[Lucid Dreamer]

Thank you!

[Ally Monique]

I love how you related the cosmos to love, in my opinion, it was very unique :) Short and cute poem! I really enjoyed reading :) You truly are a dreamer, creating stories only to be seen in the most wondrous of dreams :)

[Lucid Dreamer]

Thank you so much! I'm always day dreaming, so I guess it's coming in handy now ha.

[Matching Socks]

Whoa. This is just the best one yet from you.
It's short and sweet but packed with the goodness that steals a girls breath away.

[Lucid Dreamer]

Thank you so much! You always say kind words about my writings. :)

[Matching Socks]

Well you always deserve the praise.
Why don't you write something crap so I can roast you for a change...

[Lucid Dreamer]

lol okay, either latter today or tomorrow I will post something crappy for you.