Silence

Short poem

Take a deep breath of
cold air hits your face.
You smile for
no one is there.
Solitude, silence
Shiver, sigh
And you alone
And you your mind

Author's Note

Some words form part of 2 sentences at once on purpose.

Reviews

[Devilish_Light]

I like this! It says so much with hardly any words. The message is clear yet there is an endless possibility of what it could be. Good Job!

[TadKent]

There's something captivating about silence. It's so rare and under-appreciated to have complete and total silence. Sometimes we don't know how to handle something precious like that.

[Silvario]

interesting! had to read this twice after seeing your note >.<

never read anything like it before. clever and creative and you get the feel for the piece across very well.

nicely done indeed :)