Just a Tiny Drop of Emptiness Watching Itself in a Mirror

Just a Tiny Drop of Emptiness Watching Itself in a Mirror

A Poem by Lucian Dantes

I startled.

I thought it was the branches
hitting, sporadically, my window. 

But I was wrong, that was me, too ...

It was me, no longer dressed
in neither my body, nor in my thought

but just wanting to turn the seeing inward. 

I was just a tiny drop of emptinesswatching itself in the mirror.

And then I saw : 

After the stars will be extinguished

I will linger
as a lonely, naked, tear

projected unto
the burned retina of the sky.

© 2014 Lucian Dantes


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Thank you for sharing this depth idea for emptiness.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very creative and full of wonderful imagery.. I loved that closing line..xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Lucian Dantes

9 Years Ago

Thank you for loving it! Lucian

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