Damned

Have you ever wanted to be saved from your personal hell?

Please someone save me from this hell

My hero has left me, he is gone

Now Im stuck here all alone

Burning in other's flames of wrath

I can not save myself

I need someone to get me out

 

The flames nip my soul

Burning at my heart

I am trapped in this fiery hell

Is there anyone who can save me?

Or am I enternally damned

Damned to suffer by other's hate

 

Hate which fuels the fire

The fire that encircles my heart and soul

Help me! I can not get out

Out of this hell I call home

Suffering that I must endure

Until someone puts out those flames

With their tenderness and love

 

I can not save myself

 

Will anyone rescure me?

 

Or will I forever be damned to burn here?

Author's Note

This is writen from me feeling trapped in a personal hell and no way to get out. My hero has gone to Mississippi and I am stuck here to endure alone. Now that he is gone, people take advantage of that, and hurt me.

Reviews

[The Elder]

You laid your heart open to all of us. That takes courage.
This is powerful and real, the reader can feel your pain and suffering.
I hope you find your rescuer.

[Sean M. Addams]

very deep piece ... i've been trapped in my own personal hell before and not too fun... overall very nicely done and very interesting piece... i thought this was done very well... nice job on this one!!!