Fairy Wings

this is a poem i wrote on a spur of the moment

I sit gazing into the sky
it looks like another world waiting to get lost in it with you
wanting, waiting to spread my wings
reaching to this other world above me
looking around to see nothing
crying for help
i take one last breath and jump
my wings spread high to the sky and i lift into the air feeling the wind in my face, the stars ahead, and the world below...

Reviews

[I-smile]

I can see myself a top of a building.
The feeling. the taste of freedom and feeling you're capable of anything.
On another note, i feel the desperation you have.
Nicely written!

[0tulissa]

This is breath-taking. 100%