Blake

I'm a helpless romantic, I just can't help it
It's not easy being the last of my kind, or trying to find
Someone like you.
All you do, it just amazes me
The way you twitch your nose when you think I don't see
Oh, Blake, I want to know,
Does it ever hurt being so beautiful?

I think you should make a 180,
Stroke my hair while you call me baby
I'm right behind you, just take a second glance
I might not fit into you arms right, because of my lack of height,
but with my lips on yours, who cares?

Author's Note

It's just about this boy met at freshman orientation. I think we connected :D

Reviews

[Daytonight]

There are a lot of us out there. Great write. Keep on penning.

[Muse]

Your muse, and your inspiration works well for you! Well done.
A very sweet enjoyable read!

[Sweet Emotions]

You're not the only helpless romantic out there, I'm loving this poem. Connecting with people is great, congratz to you! Keep writing about him.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Really unique.

[November Gold]

Nicely done!

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Cool poem. Those boys just out of reach, or maybe, with some luck, just in reach. It was worded well, very interesting, real and entertaining. I enjoyed reading it a lot. A solid effort. Daniel

[Roxi L]

I loved the little things included in the poem. Theyv really added to the adoration.

Writing keeps the dream alive
~V~

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write... nice ending, and i loved the little things you put into this such as this line, liked this line:
"The way you twitch your nose when you think I don't see"

[Lily Mae]

This is a very nice write... well done..xx

[Tasha]

It sounds like you connected. This was very well structure. Wonderful piece.
♥ Ta'Shandra