It's better than us fighting...

Let's stay quiet forever.
It's better than us fighting.

Let's share an ice cream.
It's better than us fighting.

Let's sing together.
It's better than us fighting.

Why is everything with you so difficult with you? Why must you always irk me? Why must I always irk you?

Stab me with a knife in my heart.
It's better than us fighting...

Author's Note

I wrote this around March when my crush and I were going through some tough times. He and I now continue to hate each other.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Short and simple and to the point...
I liked reading this.

[Sweet Emotions]

That's an awful feeling, that last line there. I hope you've been able to get passed this dislike and live at peace with each other's existence.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Powerful with frustrated feelings it feels like, i can kind of relate to part of this... nice write.

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like the two last lines the most..
Very well done..

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Wordup]

The last two lines are so powerful,
an expression of the deepest kind of love,
yet the beginning of your poem expresses tolerance of love. Its a build up of what I will do to love you.

This is a powerful poem, keep writing them...

[karmax]

Strong emotion packed penning. spread the love! Nice job

[KAREN]

Strong and powerful write filled with anger.

[Review]

lots of better things to do than fight. I agree.
Good Job! Keep writing!
**Review**

[Daytonight]

Great work! The only thing I would have done different is in the next to last stanza I would have put each question on a line of its own. But that is just me. Lol!