First Friend and best friend

This story is about me & my best friend when we first met

When I was little, I always play alone. Until on that fateful day, I met someone who changed my life.

3 years ago..

" Who are you?" I ask the boy who stand in front of me

" I'm *name*, I'm your friend." he said while smilling at me

" .... You're not afraid if everyone don't want to be friends with you anymore?" I ask him

" Why should I ?, You always play alone and yet I never see you cry. Why do you always play alone?"

" ..... They hate me... They say I'm a fraud.. They say I cheated on my exams..." I answered

" Did you cheat?" he ask

"..... If I said no... would you beleive me?"

"Of course! I know that you're not lying, because I always watch you and I always see you study." He said

At the moment He said that, I broke down to tears.... No one ever told me  that...

Then he hug me

" You're not alone okay? Actually I have friends who wants to be your friend... And actually  You're really popular with the boys." he said while smilling again... I love the way he smiles at me

" Really?"

"Yes, Why would I lie to you?"

Then after that, he introduce me to his friend... And ALL of his friend is well.. boys... and they always staring at me like I was A Goddess or something.... It always make me blush... Being a social retard that I am...

All of us then became best friend....

Even until now... Even after he left..

At the day he left, he left me a letter

Dear Cresent,

Look Cresent, even after I left you're not going to feel lonely again. You have many friends now.. You don't need me anymore... And I want you to wait for me, I don't know how long but, I promise you.. I'll come back for you. And today is your birthday right? Well, I hope you like the present.. I have spend half my allowance to buy that you know!

                                From your best friend,

               *name*

When I finish reading the letter I cry...  then I look at the small box that's been wrap with a red ribbon

I open the well-wrapped box

Then I gasp .... the gift was...

A silver necklace with His name written on it.

I cry again

 

After that I always wear the necklace...

To remember him...

My first and Best friend

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Reviews

[Sound]

The writing should definitely be re-read and corrected. Horrible grammar. The story is quite touching and good, but I really insist you fix the little things that hold it all up together.

[The DuchessPoet]

This is so beautiful, my talented, friend!
Absolutely beautiful!

Your fan,
The Duchess...

[anthony lopez]

O M G! I LOVE THIS! I AM CRYING RIGHT NOW! SUPERB!