My Dearest Love

What about tonight?

Come tarry with me mine love

I miss my dearest love preaching his love to me

I miss thy soft sweet voice

Lay thy head on my shoulder my love I shall make u better

 I must beseech art thou not my love?

I wilt fix thy wounds

A laugh u make come through mine lips

Ah thy broken spirit I shall lift it higher

My dear love do not groan in pain and sorrow

For I shall always love you

To-night my heart is light

I shall set thy heart a blaze too

Whisper in mine ear softly

As I may fall asleep tonight with thy memories

Thy horrid memories linger on thy skin

I feel thy sorrow

I shall make my love better

 

So warm my loves skin is

But how hideous thine memories are

War and death seen in thine eyes

Someone has blinded thine heart

Someone has taught you to never love

How terrible their venom has spread

But one glorious day my love with see with an open mind

And love once more

Thy tears fall softly on thy warm cheek

Oh my dear love

I have loved thee since my eyes first gazed at you

Since mine heart felt warm once again

Please do not cry my love

Do not cry in pain or remorse

Thy say thy a monster? nay

No matter what thy wilt do I shall always love thee

 Whither thou goest, I shall go

 

 

 

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

That was nice ,tender and so emotional..
Come my love stay with me tonight,preach your love to me,miss the sweet voice
Lay your head on my shoulders and I will make you better,fix your wounds
Your broken spirits I shall lift,dont groan in pain and sorrow for I will love you tonight
Tonight my heart is light,I will set your heart ablaze too,I will make you feel better tonight ..my love
that was a lovely tender write..

[17thWhitePrince]

WOW !!! Again I must say WOW !!! WOW !!! I mean WOW !!!
I think you could kill any guy you wanted with words like that !!! hahahaha
I think they would just fall at your feet !!!
I think you just gave me an idea for a poem !!!
I especially loved the language that you used throughout the entire poem !!!
It was sooo romantic and just WOW !!!
This is definately going in my favorites list !!!

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very Shakespearean in context! I love the yearning that display, along with the intelligence and emotions as well. Very classically poetic!

"So warm my loves skin is
But how hideous thine memories are
War and death seen in thine eyes
Someone has blinded thine heart"

Good write!

[x]

wow truely great writeing i would never be able to word anything like u can

[Ryan Heisel]

I love how traditional you made this sound. The way you word this is amazing. Great write!

[Gema]

Wow!
I love it, reminds me of shakespear noble and love secret poem.
I love the way you also worded it very strong and pure like love!
Well done i love it Heidi =)

[C.J.]

wow i love my mom the same way but i could never say it like you can lol