The Key

There was one person that seemed to save him

She took away all of his painful memories

With her all the loneliness in his heart was killed

His heart was no longer a tomb

She had warmed his heart as it once was

The slightest kiss had revived his spirits and lifted his soul

For one girl made a difference

He had never thought it was possible to love again

Yet she had gave him another thought

For she herself would lay on the grass thinking about true love

For she had found it in him

The true love she thought was a myth

She had finally found it

And he himself found it in her

Deep within their souls connect

And their hearts found

No longer his heart a dark cold tomb within him

But a warm joyful feeling inside him

For she wipped his tears away

And unlocked the key to his heart

 

 

 

Author's Note

Kinda short but very sincere

Reviews

[x]

very nice flow very smooth

[Kameron Armitage]

I liked this one a lot. It had strong, meaningful tone to it. I enjoyed reding this because it gave me the sense that I better understand you;) Great job!

[The Mad Prophet]

Well done, I thought it had a nice flow. Hard to relate, but most love poems are. It was easy to feel what you wrote, that was nice. Great job.