Love

You feel her cherry lip gloss

On your lips

You feel her touch

 Across her skin

You feel her heart

When she sleeps on you

She kissed you

And you feel butterflys

These feelings are what you think of

When you see your crush at school

When she walks toward you

You feel nervous and anxious

She has been your friend for years

Why don't you tell her?

How you really feel about her

Why don't you tell her?

That you love her?

 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Great thoughts and feelings in a fine poem

So hope he tells....

Thanks for sharing your sweet poem

[Gema]

Aww i really love the way you have described your feeling for love!
The cherry lipgloass is really great!
The feelibngs i feel when i read it really paints a picture!
maybe add some colour to your writing like i do to make it stand out ofn maybe bits you want enphesis on!
Well written well done x

[Nicole Renee]

This was a really cute poem; everybody knows the feeling of having a crush on a guy.

-Nicole