What Goes Around

You think it's fun

To push her around

Beat her til she screams

And almost bleeds to death

Do you think it's fun for her

Having blood drip down her face

Seeing her loving father beat her

Just remember who hurt her

Who did this to her

What she remembers

What she hears

What she fears

She fears you

She doesn't want to get hurt again

She won't forget what you've done

You may have changed your way

But she won't forget

The sighs and screams

The bruises and cuts

The blood and tears

 

One day

Just one day she will stand up for herself

You may think she is too weak

To stand for herself

To make her own decisions

But she will prove you wrong

She is strong

But you make her weak

So I hope you enjoyed giving her pain

Cause what goes around

Comes around

Reviews

[Mav]

You write very well, Harley; with lots of feeling and emotion. I love the style and the flow of the piece as well. Yes, karma is a b***h and she never forgets. You do get back what you put out into this world. Excellent!!!

[emmajoy]

Ouch, that hurts and hurts a lot... Badly, badly amazing how people thrive on hurting others cos they want power to feel they're big, mighty .

Your poem literally hurts. You'll find the strength. You've already shown it in putting down your words for the world to see. If they're true... survive. If they're fiction, thank you for speaking for so many and so magnificently. 'But she will prove you wrong .. She is strong'

Take care to nurture your writing skills, they have power,