A Wee Bit 'o Philosophy

During my time I have seen many things that may shock you.

I have heard ridicule and laughter, at the expense of my father,

When the cackling of witches surrounded their pot of brew.

I have saved my mother, from a drunken f****r

Most of which I do not wish to tell you.

I have seen pictures of war, of limbs that have been torn

From their bodies and left casually strewn.

I have helped friends who have fainted, because they were inebriated

From alcohol and drugs which will forever elude you.

I have fought and scrapped bodybuilders who have stamped

On my friend’s face as he lay on the floor at his shoes.

The point that I’m making, is that you cannot keep shaking

Your fist at the road behind you.

All of this obsession will lead to depression

And that will be the end of you.

Keep looking forward, I promise it will be worth it

When you discover the other half of you.

Reviews

[Jay Levon]

good lines, and a bit of hope, well done

[Priscilla Sayers]

Altough I look forward, well, really just at right now, still depressed. Yup, well it must be a screw loose somewhere:) Wanna probe awhile, hee hee, just jokes! But great writing, I love the message!

[Marie]

Ordinarily I won't review something written mre than a day or two ago. But this was pretty good.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is very inspiring...to move forward and forge on to the next phase of our lives, as we shed the painful layers of our past... Starting fresh, yet learning from experiences will only help us grow and discover ourselves. Well penned!

[Lowesy]

glad to see so many people were inspired by this.....