You'll Never Know

This is dedicated to my love :) (He didn't know this)

Mesmerized by your pretty little eyes

the first time you look at me was nice

my heart beat pound and race by twice

never thought i would feel as freeze as ice

This is all a new concept for me

to be attracted and a girlfriend wannabe

that doesn't even exist in science per se

but every normal teenage girl would see

you joked around with me every time

you never thought i was hoping you're mine

when you're there i pretend to be fine

even it hurts inside the heart of mine

all you know is that i am a friend

who is always there for you when you needed

and never feel for you the hatred

that I avoid this feelings to trend

I always prayed for times with you was infinite

So that we can be together for longer times definite

even I know your feelings for me was explicit

I can handle the pain for as long as I breathe

Author's Note

Ignore grammatical lapses :) I'm just a beginner :) Love you :*

Reviews

[Nene]

They will get better with practice!!! :D
For now
Look should be looked
Race- raced
Freeze- frozen
It's a beautiful poem. I think every teenage girl can relate to it... I loved the way you put your feelings... You are pretty good!!!!!
There was one line, I practically fell in love with
'I avoid these feeling to trend'
Along with showing, what a wonderfull person you are, it conveys a beautiful message.. 'Feeling's to trend' ..... very well written!!!!
Thanx for sharing

[Daffodils]

Thanks for the information :) and for the feedback Nene :)