haven't thought of a good title yet.

haven't thought of a good title yet.

A Story by Brittney;;
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So far it's about a group of mustangs in the desert that I am watching out for.

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  The sound of the hooves of the wild mustangs running on the rough terrian. My heart beats faster and faster as they get closer. The wind picks up and the sky becomes full of dark clouds. I try to pull my hood over my head but I can't the wind is too strong. Image starts to get a little jumpy and moving around a lot. I hide behind this big rock with a tree beside it. The tree looks as if it's glowing in this storm that's about to hit. The storm looks like it's going to be big. I get off of Image and hold on to her reins for dear life. Then i notice a hole like scene in the cliff. i rush her over there with her freaking and trying to pull away. It's a cave like area, we get in it and I fall to teh ground and cover myself for dear life. Then i got to think, why is there a tree in the middle of the desert?

  Okay this is not the time for me to think about the darn tree. I should be thinking about my life right now. You never know what could happen! Image and I could get caught in this cave for god knows how long. i throw myself to the ground hoping, praying that god will take care of me. I let go of the reins and cover my face with my hands. I can hear the rawring of the thunder and I can just see the lighting striking down on the ground. Of course me sitting here I'm worrying about Image and the Mustangs. What am I? Crazy!Oh no I just care about them way to much and me worrying is just a sign of that.

© 2009 Brittney;;


Author's Note

Brittney;;
i'm not done yet but what do you think so far? I'm thinking about changing some things but this is the first draft. dont mind the misspelling of the words on here.

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thats really good i cant wait till u finish it :)

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Brittney;;
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Boones Mill, VA



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Heyy This Brittney. I love horses; quarter horses and throughbreds are my favorite types of breeds. my horses are my life and always will come first. i love music definitely COUNTRY! I love to watch m.. more..