You Looked Happier

You Looked Happier

A by LovexMonet

I saw a picture

of you today.

You looked happier

then.

I wondered to myself

if I could make you look like that...

A certain sparkle

and a certain smile.

I wonder if I'm

good enough.

The thing I fear most

is not being enough

for you...

Is a fail

and a loss.

I don't know what I'd do

if it came down to that...

What could I do?

I would never force to you

stay around

if you didn't want to,

and I would

let you go...

Watch you walk away.

But god,

would it hurt.

© 2009 LovexMonet


Author's Note

LovexMonet
Story picture found at: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_BuYWYfqvUEY/RwOxky7smJI/AAAAAAAAArY/Wh6wXvlDJxQ/s400/blue+eyes.jpg

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This is simple and straightfoward. I like the short lines and slow pace it has, and it is very emotional. Full of love and pain and disappointment. Well penned. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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LovexMonet
LovexMonet

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Born and raised in Hawaii, I am now a sophomore in college attending USF to get my bachelors degree. I am currently striving to succeed in my major and minor: Graphic design and photo journalism. My.. more..

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