Perfect

We live in a perfect world.

We all thought

we were in the

perfect world

before we put

away our childish 

ways and became

rude and childless.

Author's Note

I haven't written anything on here in a while but I haven't totally forgotten this website, I've just been freaking out about school and life. This is one of the lesser poems from my personal poem journal that I wanted to share. I hope you like it.

Reviews

[Eddie M deadwolf]

Right on Man, Liked it, short but good

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Puts things in perspective...
the way this translate the meaning...
and sends it home...