To be alive

To be alive

A Poem by Lovesicksoul
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Inspired from the Dead poet's society

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To be alive,
To be touched tenderly by the sun's skin
To hear the whispers of the wind telling you to be free and fly,
The moon reflecting it's beauty on you ,
The stars falling from the sky just to honour life,
Drops dripping on the ground giving life to the lover, human's falling for each other
Even thou they know they might never be together,
Oh captain,my captain I understood
The senses, sacrifices we do to be alive and to live ;
Love, poetry, romance are the essence of human, I bound my existence in the devotion of the trueness of life,
To be alive ♡ ✧

© 2023 Lovesicksoul


Author's Note

Lovesicksoul
Please help me to improve my writing with true reviews , thank you ♡

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I love your imagery, to start with. To be touched by the sun's skin...that's a brilliant line. You have maintained that flair throughout and I appreciate your thought that to be alive is to want to fly, to touch the sky and also to fall in love hopelessly. Poetry and human emotions make us alive and not just existing.

Your poetry is very nice to read and you can develop it at your own pace. Poetry is something that's very personal and emanates from within. No one can teach anyone how to write poetry because that would be like imposing themselves upon you. I have almost begun to think that someone's poetry is almost as unique as their fingerprint.

My one request however is that kindly post in the correct place. You posted a snapshot of your poem that was slightly difficult to read. The rest was all great. Thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovesicksoul

1 Year Ago

Thankyou so much Divya 🤝✨
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome.



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I love your imagery, to start with. To be touched by the sun's skin...that's a brilliant line. You have maintained that flair throughout and I appreciate your thought that to be alive is to want to fly, to touch the sky and also to fall in love hopelessly. Poetry and human emotions make us alive and not just existing.

Your poetry is very nice to read and you can develop it at your own pace. Poetry is something that's very personal and emanates from within. No one can teach anyone how to write poetry because that would be like imposing themselves upon you. I have almost begun to think that someone's poetry is almost as unique as their fingerprint.

My one request however is that kindly post in the correct place. You posted a snapshot of your poem that was slightly difficult to read. The rest was all great. Thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovesicksoul

1 Year Ago

Thankyou so much Divya 🤝✨
AYVID N

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome.

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Added on March 20, 2023
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Lovesicksoul
Lovesicksoul

New Delhi, Delhi, India



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