My Number One Sin

Again, about my girl. Wrote this just a few weeks ago.

 

I still hear your voice when you're silent.
You're words drill easily into my mind.
In my mind, I beg for one more touch...
I never knew I'd be so reliant.
But you've got me caught in your web.
So sweet, precious, so abnormally kind.
And all I have to say is: I Love You so Much.

When you whisper in my ear, you're all I can hear.
When you nip at my skin in such a playful manner
The love makes my heart ache til I shed a tear.
When you're voice reaches me, my skin gets bumps.
When you're breathing on me, my stomach turns to knots and lumps.

When you kiss me with such affection...
It's got be begging for salvation...
And if you pull away I'm begging for attention.
When you scold at me so fiercely I'm begging for redemption.

When you pull away it's got me whining for more.
When your hands whisper against my skin,
My heart bursts with love and my mind does soar.
Yes, I've told you that you're my simple win...
But you're so much more: You're my Number One Sin.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[deeps]

Such an emotional write here,
I can feel this one, it's very well expressed.