Little Secrets

Wrote it when I was...well...thirteen. Just a few days ago. Random five min thing, ya know? Boredom in science, and I was sitting ahead of my crush.

I can feel you when you're near, I need you so.
But I run and hide my feelings, I cannot go so low.
I suddenly get hyped up when you're next to me.
I should be straight up, tell things in honesty.

You touch my hand; I jump internally to the sky.
You whisper, your breath hitting my skin; I almost cry.
You cup my face, I know you're only playing...
But God, if you could only know what my mind is saying.

I should be straight with you, full with honesty.
But, my insides when I'm with you, Gosh you should see.
They're in turmoil and need, love all mixed. All three!
Gosh, I reach out to you; I seem to get blown away.
When you ask those questions, this is what I should say:

When you ask me if I'm alright: I should say no.
When you ask why: I should say I feel so low.
When you ask why: I should say "I Love You".
When you ask why: I'll just blush and stutter.
When you ask if it's true: "It's true."

But these are things left unsaid.
Things left unsaid til either one is dead.
I cannot share my secret with you.
No matter how false or how true.

Author's Note

Criticize is welcomed, as it shall always be.

Reviews

[Star Shyne]

Great poem. With such a poem you crush will love you! I'm 1 year older than you and can't write such love poems.

[Legion]

Not bad for thirteen. And you should be straight with him. ;)