MY LIFE :Am i insane you tell me

my life is hell even when you think its good

really im dead inside believe me you should

i try and smile haha i fooled everyone

i hide in the dark away from the sun

i hate the light every ones so fake

i choose the darkness thats the path i take  

no matter how you are in the day

ur alone in the dark it takes you away

all alone no matter how you look at it

if your not ready the thought will hit

worse then any word or punch

brace your self you might lose your lunch

i fool you because u would be scared

of the real me like as if you ever cared

about what i think or how i am

follow your sheapard you little lamb

i will not follow you i own my own life

with only darkness and 1 hand on my knife

ill fight with you every step of the way

control me?!?! its your time to pay

the voices tell me your time is up

ur bloods my water ill fill up my cup

and drink it fast for more water comes

u gasp for air as it fills up your lungs

am i insane thats for you to tell

i am the devil draging you to hell

 

Author's Note

plz dont com[lain about grammar and spelling i suck with both and i hope this poem is good i just came up with it on the top of my head i would usally write it down and fix it but i dident have my books and i dident want to forget it :$ dont hate ^-^

Reviews

[xSamilynnx]

amazing!!!!! really well written :D

[Kiara]

I like it :)