First Meeting

Once upon a time, in a far away land on a dark and stormy day,

He was there.

His eyes colder than the rain beating down upon us.

 

And there I stood. Motionless. Speechless.

My body heat dropping below freezing while my cheeks burned red.

 

Not a word said as we walked along the path.

Rain turning to ice as it touched me gently now,

Steam as it hit him.

Yet we paid no mind, and walked silently.

 

We were oppsites, magnets.

They say they attract.

Science was never my strong suit.

Is this the feeling that they talk about when they say chemistry?

 

Our hands fit perfectly together, entwined.

As we walk with only the sound of nature between us.

The rain funning dry, leaving us wet as the sun rose again.

 

Tears glistened off the green with envy leaves.

Petals of all colors dripped the last of the newly made dew drops.

His eyes turned to oceans, deep, warm, mysterious, Blue.

Warmth of his skin defrosted my chills.

Walking with less than whispers from our lips.

 

Day fell to purple dusk.

The shimmering white moon lighting up our way,

And we must then part,

To seperate corners of the world we hold.

Nothing to destroy the silence.

 

Only his lips on mine.

Sweet, soft, innocent, Love.

Reviews

[Jenna]

This is other wordly to me. It was simple which was sweet. It was also classic. Like something out of a story book.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is so romantic... I always found the rain to be such a aphrodisiac.. your piece is really endearing such subtle sensuality and passion

We were oppsites, magnets.
They say they attract.
Science was never my strong suit.
Is this the feeling that they talk about when they say chemistry?


this part is my fav cause I can relate to it... not sure bout that whole opposites attract thing myself but then again i too never was much for chemistry.

[Miss Prince]

"Science was never my strong suit.

Is this the feeling that they talk about when they say chemistry?"

That is the coolest line. I love it. Well done. Very honest.