Doubt

What happens when you know he doesn't love you anymore?

Doubt is screaming in my head again,

The way that makes me cringe and cry,

 It never seems to leave.

 

It’s making thoughts all lead to tears,

And the depression seems to be coming back.

 

The way you never talk anymore,

Or how you always have to go.

Hours on end that we don’t say a word to each other,

That drive me mad.

 

Just the thought is more than I can stand,

You not loving me anymore.

My ever waking nightmare,

I fear is coming true.

 

How could it not though?

Us being so far apart,

The inevitable was sure to come.

 

Denial is all I have now,

Hoping you mean it when you say never,

And I can stand pushing those thoughts aside.

While I watch as we drift farther from the truth,

Staying only to avoid the heart break.

 

Doubt is screaming in my head again,

And this time it may be right...

 

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

An excellent piece~Thanks for sharing this~Fran

[JC Fox]

I agree the print was small and had to put my nose up to the screen but other than that it was excellent

[Dead Angel]

*sigh* what do you do when the one you love doesn't love you? that is the question some people are left to faced and its very sad. well other than the small print, this was a very good write. creative and heartbreaking. well done!! :)

[Keira]

wow. superb!