I loved you

I loved you

A Poem by Lovelysongs

I told you that Loved you
key word, Loved
But all you can seem to hear is love
You try to crawl back to me,
wondering why I wont take you back,
If you had listened very carefully,
you would have heard why,
I LOVED you,
but theres many other reasons as well,
I wont go out with liars,
cheaters,
or promises breakers,
But, the main reason,
is that I LOVED you. 

© 2010 Lovelysongs


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Good write about sorry but it is over...Good work..Sunflower

Posted 14 Years Ago


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wonderful, powerful and imaginative..empowerment to just the one word. well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


"key word, Loved"
very motional and great flow..

keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love it you are an amazing writer.

Posted 14 Years Ago


aww i love this poem paige its awsome

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Lovelysongs

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Hello there, my Name is Paige. I am 13, and i am in 8th grade. I am a loving, carefree person who enjoys to write about my feelings about others. I like to write anything. I enjoy art. more..

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