never

doors are open

the blinds are shut

the power of  love combines in to one

no more bleeding

a massive heart ace

don't you ever let this fragileheart break

blinded by hate why couldn't she see

her heart will now and forever be

he treated her right

& they didn't fight

two big hearts

left in the dark

two different lives

that would soon collide

hopefully love will soon be mine

the love of a couple starts to shine

just like the moon and the sun it will never die

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

It didn't matter if I knew you were talking about your eyes being shut, your mind shaking off the confusion of another person's mistake, and/or just comparing things that happen in general to how YOU would change them to work in your favor. I loved it, and you had me reading it a few times. It's not that hard if you like it... to read it again!! lol What a huge heart you have to write like that. Short, sweet, and many many things to consider to right our OWN lives. You are beautiful, Cheyenne....... xoxo -Mark

[Cheyenne Delay]

Thank you very much I try and what i mean by the doors are open and the blinds are shut is that I've left so many paths open but once I get there there's something stopping me say perhaps you want to let a lot of light in your house but you choose to open the door instead of the windows but in this poem it sate that I've let love come in to my life yet I'm letting my past keep me from what I really want.

[Patrick Henry]

That was as beautiful as your poem..... You are going to be a real treat in the future if I can find your page!! Because of what you've written here, I have a poem you may find to your liking.... called "A Future Heart Afire". You....are.....shelved, so I can enjoy you later as well!! : ) xoxo -Mark

[Cheyenne Delay]

is it on your page