I am the girl

Dear god,

I am the girl who loves to laugh.
I am the girl louder than the class.
I am the girl with a smile on her face.
I am the girl who's heart can't break.
I am the girl who let's every one in
I am the girl full of LIFE.

. . .

Dear god,

I am the girl who secretly cries.
I am the girl silent on the inside.
I am the girl with a painted mask.
I am the girl with a heart made of glass.
I am the girl who feels alone
I am the girl DEAD inside

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Two sides to every story as they say and don't judge a book by its cover! In this you certainly bring these saying to life. The repitition works in this short piece.

[SuspectGray]

Not to often that we take the time to see both sides of ourselves.

A prayer to God to see the good in us and a prayer to God to help mend us.

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I loved it very well said:) You shared a lot of emotion:)

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful use of repetition. We allow few people to see and know who we are. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote