Deepest of them all

for Bridgett ✨

I am going to invite you into the deepest part of my mind.
The part where no one dares to find.
I am crazy and I am blind.
I act wild,
without expecting consequences of any kind.
I'm different but I'm fine.
I can tell you why.
why we lie,
Why we hide,
Who's to live
In a selfish world
Like mine

Author's Note

Nothing serious. better work coming soon

Reviews

[SadBones]

This could be something really good. The first line captures your attention, but somehow it loses momentum. It's like you need to change the diction to go with that line. Like act like your taking us on a tour through the deepest, darkest parts of your mind. Then you kind of threw me off with all the we stuff. I think you should focus on you, not the outside world in the piece.
XOXO SadBones

[lovelyAnaa]

Yeah it was my intention to, I just had a little struggle with it. When I speak of myself I get cautious idk why